The first draft " my dream job"

# Interior Designer #



          A wisdom said " find a job you enjoy , and you will never work a day in your life " . I'm not sure if that's entirely accurate - even dream jobs can be hard work ,but it does make life much easier when you are doing something you love. So. from early on in life, all that I ever imagined I would be was an interior designer.

        Interior design is a widely misunderstood profession. People get the notion this business is all about picking out colors, working with beautiful fabrics, and being creative all the live long day. That isn't so. It is about making the sale, organizing the details and making sure EVERYTHING is perfect . 

       Working in the field of interior designing is a rewarding career. As it has a lot of advantages. Firstly , Interior designers are able to be creative, they create an environment that suits the inhabitants well. They are using their creative talents to come up with practical solutions . Secondly, Interior designing is considered as a helping industry . Interior designers can be a lifesaver for homeowners who know what they want but not how to make it happen. They help make dreams come true.Thirdly, designers are able to control their own hours .As they do work that they enjoy while managing to meet their family's  needs. Also they are able to earn a comfortable living because they can make much money .Finally, designers can find their personal satisfaction in their career. There is a huge satisfaction in starting with a few pieces to work with or even just an idea and bringing it to its perfection . These satifacted moments are why designers really enjoy working in their field.


       It is commonly known that every career has its pros and cons . So, the field of interior designing has its disadvantages .

The hardest thing about being an interior designer is probably selling your design to the client. You have to be very confident of your design so you can make the client get behind you.

Also, studying interior design is not easy. At many colleges, interior design is a selective major.And even if you manage to be accepted , you will have to undergo portfolio reviews regularly. Lastly, it is an expensive major .As you'll definitely have to buy a computer with some power to be able to run some architectural programs. Art markers and pencils and the other materials required  are also expensive.

        To sum up, being what you want to be and what you ever dream ,is really a very successful way to be happy in your life. So, just decide what you want to be , learn about what you have to do to get there, develop a plan, and then execute it. If you work smart and follow your plan, you'll eventually get where you want to be and  you will succeed .

OUTLINE " MY DREAM JOB"



#Interior Designer#

* Introduction:

           A wisdom said " find a job you enjoy , and you will never work a day in your life " . I'm not sure if that's entirely accurate - even dream jobs can be hard work ,but it does make life much easier when you are doing something you love. So. from early on in life, all that I ever imagined I would be was an interior designer.


* Body:

       1. what is interior design about ?
          2. what are the advantages of being an interior designer?
          3. what are the disadvantages of being an interior designer?
         


*Conclusion:

          To sum up , being what you want to be and what you ever dream  ,is really a very successful way to be happy in your life. So, decide what you want to do, learn about what you have to do to get there, develop a plan, and then execute it. If you work smart and follow your plan, you'll eventually get where you want to be and you will succeed .



The final draft





The educational system in Egypt

                 It is a universally accepted fact that education is considered the most powerful instrument ,to eradicate poverty and provide socio-economic development,welfare of society. Unfortunately , Egypt educational system has a poor quality by comparison to many other countries. It is very obvious that Egypt education is still not as good and rewarding as it should be with all the financial,human,cultural and other resources that Egypt has.

 

 

          The educational system in Egypt faces several problems in both primary and higher education .Population growth is a big challenge to the Egyptian government. There are not enough school buildings to meet the increasing number of students. Classes are over-crowded, which hinders the learning process.Government budget allocated for schools to meet their basic needs, is relatively small. As a result, large number of schools are physically and structurally unfit to be used. Some structures are endangering the life of students due to their very poor conditions. Recently, it has been noticed that some schools do not have proper facilities to be used by students, they do not have enough laboratory equipments.In addition teachers are not properly trained. Hence, the quality of teaching is poor, a situation that concerns many parents.There is a huge increasing in private tutoring .Also the absence of a link between pre-university and university education is considered one of the most urgent problems which faces education in Egypt.

             According to what mentioned before, Egypt educational system needs cooperative efforts in order to reform it.Our education can be better by having a clear education policy that fulfills needed goals.Building more schools especially in rural areas to overcome the population growth problem.Curriculum must be reformed by making it more interesting and raise cooperation rather than competition.Also we must take into account the diversity of  human nature ,the creativity of students and their talents and needs.Students should be taught that learning and acquiring knowledge is something they have to do willingly on their own. Parents must be aware that they share a great deal in teaching their children. Schools can do a lot but they will never be enough.The government should give more attention to faculty members through training them .And universities should move towards having a bigger role in society.


             To sum up, It is a fact that in any society education is the most important investment for future development. Hence, it is very important for the Egyptian government, specially the Ministry of Education, to seriously re-evaluate its educational system.If a strong and comprehensive reform starts now to change the situation which Egypt educational system is in,real outcomes could be witnessed in a short period.Accordingly, any delay in starting the change will endanger the future of the current and next generations .

 

The first draft



The educational system in Egypt

                 It is a universally accepted fact that education is considered the most powerful instrument ,to eradicate poverty and provide socio-economic development,welfare of society. Unfortunately , Egypt educational system has a poor quality by comparison to many other countries. It is very obvious that Egypt education is still not as good and rewarding as it should be with all the financial,human,cultural and other resources that Egypt has.

         The educational system in Egypt faces several problems in both primary and higher education .Population growth is a big challenge to the Egyptian government. There are not enough schools build to meet the increasing number of students. Classes are over-crowded, which hinders the learning process.Government budget allocated for schools to meet their basic needs, is relatively small. As a result, large number of schools are physically and structurally unfit to be used. Some structures are endangering the life of students due to their very poor conditions. Recently, it has been noticed in the Egyptian media that some schools do not have proper facilities to be used by students, they do not have enough laboratory equipments.In addition teachers are not properly trained. Hence, the quality of teaching is poor, a situation that concern many parents.There is a huge increasing in private tutoring .Also the absence of a link between pre-university and university education is considered one of the most problems which face education in Egypt.

          According to what mentioned before, Egypt educational system needs a cooperative efforts in order to reform it.Our education can be better by having a clear education policy that fulfills needed goals.Building more schools especially in rural areas to overcome the population growth problem.Curriculum must be reformed by making it more interesting and raise cooperation rather than competition.Also we must take into account the diversity of  human nature ,the creativity of students and their talents and needs.Students should be taught that learning and acquiring knowledge is something they have to do willingly on their own. Parents must be aware that they share a great deal in teaching their children. Schools can do a lot but they will never be enough.The government should give more attention to faculty members through training them .And universities should move towards having a bigger role in society.


          To sum up, It is a fact that in any society education is the most important investment for future development. Hence, it is very important for the Egyptian government, specially the Ministry of Education, to seriously re-evaluate its educational system.If a strong and comprehensive reform starts now to change the situation which Egypt educational system is in,real outcomes could be witnessed in a short period.Accordingly, any delay in starting the change will endanger the future of the current and next generations .

prewriting "The educational system in Egypt"

*Introduction :

           It is a universally accepted fact that education is considered the most powerful instrument ,to eradicate poverty and provide socio-economic development,welfare of society. Unfortunately , Egypt educational system has a poor quality by comparison to many other countries. It is very obvious that Egypt education is still not as good and rewarding as it should be with all the financial,human,cultural and other resources that Egypt has.

*Body :

          A. Egypt educational system faces a lot of problems such as:
                 
                  - Population growth.
                  - The small budget allocated for schools.
                  -The lack of qualified teachers.
                  -The bad conditions of school buildings.
                  -The increasing of private tutoring
                  -The lack of a good and effective management.
                  -The absence of  a link between pre-university and university education.

         B.Suggested solutions for reforming egypt's education system:
    
                  -Building more schools epecially in rural areas.
                  -Take into account the diversity of human nature,the creativity of students and their talents. 
                  -Providing an attractive environment in schools through reforming curriculum.
                  -Political and social support.
                  -A clear educational policy that fulfills goals.
                  -Parents' cooperation with schools.
                  -Universities should move towards having a bigger role in society.


*Conclusion :
   
           It is a fact that in any society education is the most important investment for future development. Hence, it is very important for the Egyptian government, specially the Ministry of Education, to seriously re-evaluate its educational system.If a strong and comprehensive reform starts now to change the situation  which Egypt educational system is in,real outcomes could be witnessed in a short period.Accordingly, any delay in starting the change will endanger the future of the current and next generations .

final draft "The Internet"



The Internet

                 Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information. The internet has become a fully integrated part of our society, touching many aspects of our business and personal lives. So, I'm totally with using the internet.

               

               The internet provides many facilities to the people who use it.The first facility is communication.Now we can communicate in a part of  a second with a person who is sitting in the other part of the world .With help of such services like e-mail,chatting and video conferencing,it has become very easy to establish a kind of global friendship where you can share your thoughts and explore other cultures of different morals.Secondly,a lot of information of different types is stored on the web server of the internet. It means that billions websites contain different information in the form of texts and pictures such as Google ,Yahoo etc. The scientists,writers,engineers and many other people use these search websites to collect latest information for different purposes. Thirdly,the internet provides the facility to get online education. Many websites of different universities provide lectures on different subjects. You can also download these lectures into your computer and listen to these lectures repeatedly .Today,it is almost required that students should use the internet for research .Teachers have started giving assignments that require research on the internet.Fourthly,you can get latest news of the world on the internet.Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the internet.They have their websites from where you can get the latest news about the events happening in the world. These websites are periodically updated or they are immediately updated with latest news when any event happens around the world. Finally,the internet provides different types of entertainment to people.You can play games with other people in any part of the world. Similarly, you can see movies, listen to  music etc. You can also make new friends on the internet for enjoyment.
 


                   In  spite of the above mentioned, there are many people who disagree with  using the internet.Those people believe that if you use the internet ,you may face grave danger. One of these dangers is theft of personal information.Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by internet hackers to make your problems worse.Today ,internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. Most of the viruses transfer from one computer to another through e-mail or when information is downloaded from the internet. These viruses create different problems in your computer. For example, they can affect the performance of your computer and damage valuable data and software stored in your computer.In addition,a lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the internet.Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or playing games. At home and offices, most of the people use internet without any positive purpose. Immorality is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children’s healthy mental life. It is a very serious issue concerning the internet.There are thousands of sites on the internet that contain immoral materials in the form of texts,pictures or movies etc. These websites damage the character of the new generation.

                To sum up, the internet is one of the most  valuable source of information. The advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages .Thus,millions of people every day benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.I really believe on the power of the internet.

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"The Internet" first draft



The Internet

                 Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information. The internet has become a fully integrated part of our society, touching many aspects of our business and personal lives. So, I'm totally with using the internet.

          The internet provides many facilities to the people who use it.First of all,communication. Now we can communicate in a part of second with a person who is sitting in the other part of the world .With help of such services like e-mail,chatting and video conferencing,it has become very easy to establish a kind of global friendship where you can share your thoughts and explore other cultures of different morals.Secondly,information . Alot of information of different types is stored on the web server of the internet. It means that billions websites contain different information in the form of texts and pictures such as Google ,Yahoo etc. The scientists,writers,engineers and many other people use these search websites to collect latest information for different purposes. Thirdly,education. Today,it is almost required that students should use the internet for research .Teachers have started giving assignments that require research on the internet.Also internet provides the facility to get online education. Many websites of different universities provide lectures on different subjects. You can also download these lectures into your computer and listen to these lectures repeatedly .Fourthly,news. You can get latest news of the world on the internet.Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the internet.They have their websites from where you can get the latest news about the events happening in the world. These websites are periodically updated or they are immediately updated with latest news when any event happens around the world. Finally,entertainment. Internet also provides different type of entertainments to people. You can play games with other people in any part of the world. Similarly, you can see movies, listen music etc. You can also make new friends on the internet for enjoyment.


           In  spite of the above mentioned, there are many people who disagree with  using the internet.those people believe that if you use the internet ,you may be facing grave danger. Firstly,theft of personal information.Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by other criminals to make your problems worse.Secondly,viruses. Today ,internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. Most of the viruses transfer from one computer to another through e-mail or when information is downloaded on the internet. These viruses create different problems in your computer. For example, they can affect the performance of your computer and damage valuable data and software stored in your computer.Thirdly,Wastage of times.A lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the internet.Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or to play games. At home and offices, most of the people use internet without any positive purpose.Finally,immorality.This is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children’s healthy mental life. A very serious issue concerning the internet.There are thousands of sites on the internet that contain immoral materials in the form of text, pictures or movies etc. These websites damage the character of new generation.

              To sum up, the internet is a most valuable source of information. The advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages .Thus,millions of people every day benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.I really believe on the power of the internet.

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