final draft "The Internet"



The Internet

                 Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information. The internet has become a fully integrated part of our society, touching many aspects of our business and personal lives. So, I'm totally with using the internet.

               

               The internet provides many facilities to the people who use it.The first facility is communication.Now we can communicate in a part of  a second with a person who is sitting in the other part of the world .With help of such services like e-mail,chatting and video conferencing,it has become very easy to establish a kind of global friendship where you can share your thoughts and explore other cultures of different morals.Secondly,a lot of information of different types is stored on the web server of the internet. It means that billions websites contain different information in the form of texts and pictures such as Google ,Yahoo etc. The scientists,writers,engineers and many other people use these search websites to collect latest information for different purposes. Thirdly,the internet provides the facility to get online education. Many websites of different universities provide lectures on different subjects. You can also download these lectures into your computer and listen to these lectures repeatedly .Today,it is almost required that students should use the internet for research .Teachers have started giving assignments that require research on the internet.Fourthly,you can get latest news of the world on the internet.Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the internet.They have their websites from where you can get the latest news about the events happening in the world. These websites are periodically updated or they are immediately updated with latest news when any event happens around the world. Finally,the internet provides different types of entertainment to people.You can play games with other people in any part of the world. Similarly, you can see movies, listen to  music etc. You can also make new friends on the internet for enjoyment.
 


                   In  spite of the above mentioned, there are many people who disagree with  using the internet.Those people believe that if you use the internet ,you may face grave danger. One of these dangers is theft of personal information.Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by internet hackers to make your problems worse.Today ,internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. Most of the viruses transfer from one computer to another through e-mail or when information is downloaded from the internet. These viruses create different problems in your computer. For example, they can affect the performance of your computer and damage valuable data and software stored in your computer.In addition,a lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the internet.Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or playing games. At home and offices, most of the people use internet without any positive purpose. Immorality is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children’s healthy mental life. It is a very serious issue concerning the internet.There are thousands of sites on the internet that contain immoral materials in the form of texts,pictures or movies etc. These websites damage the character of the new generation.

                To sum up, the internet is one of the most  valuable source of information. The advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages .Thus,millions of people every day benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.I really believe on the power of the internet.

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"The Internet" first draft



The Internet

                 Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information. The internet has become a fully integrated part of our society, touching many aspects of our business and personal lives. So, I'm totally with using the internet.

          The internet provides many facilities to the people who use it.First of all,communication. Now we can communicate in a part of second with a person who is sitting in the other part of the world .With help of such services like e-mail,chatting and video conferencing,it has become very easy to establish a kind of global friendship where you can share your thoughts and explore other cultures of different morals.Secondly,information . Alot of information of different types is stored on the web server of the internet. It means that billions websites contain different information in the form of texts and pictures such as Google ,Yahoo etc. The scientists,writers,engineers and many other people use these search websites to collect latest information for different purposes. Thirdly,education. Today,it is almost required that students should use the internet for research .Teachers have started giving assignments that require research on the internet.Also internet provides the facility to get online education. Many websites of different universities provide lectures on different subjects. You can also download these lectures into your computer and listen to these lectures repeatedly .Fourthly,news. You can get latest news of the world on the internet.Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the internet.They have their websites from where you can get the latest news about the events happening in the world. These websites are periodically updated or they are immediately updated with latest news when any event happens around the world. Finally,entertainment. Internet also provides different type of entertainments to people. You can play games with other people in any part of the world. Similarly, you can see movies, listen music etc. You can also make new friends on the internet for enjoyment.


           In  spite of the above mentioned, there are many people who disagree with  using the internet.those people believe that if you use the internet ,you may be facing grave danger. Firstly,theft of personal information.Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by other criminals to make your problems worse.Secondly,viruses. Today ,internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. Most of the viruses transfer from one computer to another through e-mail or when information is downloaded on the internet. These viruses create different problems in your computer. For example, they can affect the performance of your computer and damage valuable data and software stored in your computer.Thirdly,Wastage of times.A lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the internet.Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or to play games. At home and offices, most of the people use internet without any positive purpose.Finally,immorality.This is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children’s healthy mental life. A very serious issue concerning the internet.There are thousands of sites on the internet that contain immoral materials in the form of text, pictures or movies etc. These websites damage the character of new generation.

              To sum up, the internet is a most valuable source of information. The advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages .Thus,millions of people every day benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.I really believe on the power of the internet.

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prewriting"The Internet"

*Introduction:

     
     Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information.I'm totally with using the internet.


*Body:

     *Reasons for agreeing with using the internet:
         1.Communication.
         2.Information.
         3.Online Education.
         4.News.
         5.Entertainment.


     *The counter opinion of using the internet :
         1.Theft of personal information.
         2.Viruses.
         3.Wastage of time.
         4.Immorality
        

*Conclusion:
       
    The advantages of using the internet far outweigh the disadvantages, and millions of people everyday benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.          

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"" Air Pollution ""

                  Air is the source of life .It is the natural mixture of gases that surround the Earth. It is 99.9% nitrogen, oxygen,water vapor and inert gases. It supplies us with oxygen which is essential for our bodies to live. Unfortunately ,with increasing urbanisation and industrialisation,humans started to release more wastes into the atmosphere than nature could cope with ,which cause air pollution that has harmed the environment .

                The specific pollutants that cause air pollution are varied and plentiful. On the one hand , there are the industrial or mechanical sources such as factories. Anything burned in a factory ,not just for heat but as part of the manufacturing process, would release smoke ,ashe and other toxins into the air which cause air pollution. Another serious cause of air pollution has been the increasing use of automobiles and other modern modes of transport that rely on the burning of fossil fuels for example the black exhaust that comes from buses, trains and other large vehicles.  On the other hand, there are the environmental or natural sources such as wildfires,dust storms and volcanic eruptions which may be accompanied by poisonous gases.

          

               According to what mentioned before ,air pollution has serious implications for our health as well as for the whole environment. Its effects can include the irritation to the eyes, nose and throat.Other symptoms can include headaches ,nausea and allergic reactions. It also can include chronic respiratory disease, lung cancer, heart disease and even damage the brain,nerves,liver or kidneys.

                    

              Air pollutants such as ozone, nitrogen oxides and sulfur dioxide also have harmful effects on natural ecosystems. They can kill plants and trees by destroying their leaves, and can kill animals especially fish in highly polluted rivers. It also can contribute to global warming that changes climate globally and causes significant changes to various regions of the world for example ocean warming, rising sea levels and increasing runoff.

                   

              As air pollution is very harmful to our environment and to our health, it requires international cooperative efforts to find solutions  to stop it . People may try to restrict population growth, use less energy , improve energy efficiency ,reduce waste and move to non-polluting renewable forms of energy production. Also automobile-produced pollution can be decreased with highly beneficial results.Restricting smoking is also an important key to the healthier environment . In addition we must plant more plants which are instrumental in removing carbon monoxide from the air.

                  

             In conclusion,I would say that the fresh environment is very important for Earth and it shouldn't be destroyed nor damaged . Without air, Earth would be unable to sustain life  because air is the source of life  and it helps keep things alive .So ,we must do our best to prevent these damaging effects of air pollution and improve our air .......

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"" Air Pollution ""

                  Air is the ocean we breathe .It is the natural mixture of gases that surround the Earth. It is 99.9% nitrogen, oxygen,water vapor and inert gases. It supplies us with oxygen which is essential for our bodies to live. Unfortunately ,with increasing urbanisation and industrialisation,humans started to release more wastes into the atmosphere than nature could cope with ,which cause Air Pollution that have harmed the environment .
                
                     

                 The specific contaminants that cause Air Pollution are varied and plentiful. On the one hand , there are the industrial or mechanical sources such as factories. Anything burned in a factory ,not just for heat but as part of the manuafacturing process, would release smoke ,ashe and other toxins into the air which cause air pollution. Another serious cause of air pollution has been the increasing use of automobiles and other modern modes of transport that rely on the burning of fossil fuels for example the black exhaust that comes from buses, semis and other large vehicles.  On the other hand, there are the environmental or natural sources such as wildfires,dust storms and volcanic erruptions which may be accompanied by poisonous gases.

          

               According to what mentioned before ,air pollution has serious implications for our health as well as for the whole environment. Its effects can include the irritation to the eyes, nose and throat.Other symptoms can include headaches ,nausea and allergic reactions. It also can include chronic respiratory disease, lung cancer, heart disease and even damage the brain,nerves,liver or kidneys.

                    

              Air pollutants such as ozone, nitrogen oxides and sulfur dioxide also have harmful effects on natural ecosystems. They can kill plants and trees by destroying their leaves, and can kill animals especially fish in highly polluted rivers. It also can contribute to global warming that changes climate globally and causes significant changes to various regions of the world for example ocean warming, rising sea levels and increasing runoff.

                   

              As air pollution is very harmful to our environment and to our health, it requires international cooperative efforts to find solutions in order to stop the damage to our environment  from this big risk. People may try to restrict population growth, use less energy , improve energy efficiency ,reduce waste and move to non-polluting renewable forms of energy production. Also automobile-produced pollution can be decreased with highly beneficial results.Restricting smoking is an important key to the healthier environment and finally we must plant more plants which are instrumental in removing carbon monoxide from the air.

                  

             In conclusion,I would say that the fresh environment is very important for this planet Earth and it shouldn't be destroyed nor damaged in any way . without air Earth would be unable to sustain life  because air is the source of life  and it helps keep things alive and powers the planet.So we must do our best to prevent the damaging effects of Air pollution and improve our Air .......

             



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***Pollution in Egypt***

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  What is Air and importance of it ? 

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  What is Air Pollution ?

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  What are kinds of Air Pollution ?

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  Who and What are the major causes of Air Pollution ?

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  How does Air Pollution affect us ?

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  What are the risks involved with Air Pollution ?

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  How serious is the Air Pollution Problem ?

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  How can we prevent the damaging effects of Air Pollution ?

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  How can we improve our Air ?

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Afnan Ibrahim

Suez Canal University

Faculty of Education

English Department 4th year