The Internet
Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information. The internet has become a fully integrated part of our society, touching many aspects of our business and personal lives. So, I'm totally with using the internet.
The internet provides many facilities to the people who use it.First of all,communication. Now we can communicate in a part of second with a person who is sitting in the other part of the world .With help of such services like e-mail,chatting and video conferencing,it has become very easy to establish a kind of global friendship where you can share your thoughts and explore other cultures of different morals.Secondly,information . Alot of information of different types is stored on the web server of the internet. It means that billions websites contain different information in the form of texts and pictures such as Google ,Yahoo etc. The scientists,writers,engineers and many other people use these search websites to collect latest information for different purposes. Thirdly,education. Today,it is almost required that students should use the internet for research .Teachers have started giving assignments that require research on the internet.Also internet provides the facility to get online education. Many websites of different universities provide lectures on different subjects. You can also download these lectures into your computer and listen to these lectures repeatedly .Fourthly,news. You can get latest news of the world on the internet.Most of the newspapers of the world are also available on the internet.They have their websites from where you can get the latest news about the events happening in the world. These websites are periodically updated or they are immediately updated with latest news when any event happens around the world. Finally,entertainment. Internet also provides different type of entertainments to people. You can play games with other people in any part of the world. Similarly, you can see movies, listen music etc. You can also make new friends on the internet for enjoyment.
In spite of the above mentioned, there are many people who disagree with using the internet.those people believe that if you use the internet ,you may be facing grave danger. Firstly,theft of personal information.Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by other criminals to make your problems worse.Secondly,viruses. Today ,internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. Most of the viruses transfer from one computer to another through e-mail or when information is downloaded on the internet. These viruses create different problems in your computer. For example, they can affect the performance of your computer and damage valuable data and software stored in your computer.Thirdly,Wastage of times.A lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the internet.Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or to play games. At home and offices, most of the people use internet without any positive purpose.Finally,immorality.This is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children’s healthy mental life. A very serious issue concerning the internet.There are thousands of sites on the internet that contain immoral materials in the form of text, pictures or movies etc. These websites damage the character of new generation.
In spite of the above mentioned, there are many people who disagree with using the internet.those people believe that if you use the internet ,you may be facing grave danger. Firstly,theft of personal information.Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by other criminals to make your problems worse.Secondly,viruses. Today ,internet is the most popular source of spreading viruses. Most of the viruses transfer from one computer to another through e-mail or when information is downloaded on the internet. These viruses create different problems in your computer. For example, they can affect the performance of your computer and damage valuable data and software stored in your computer.Thirdly,Wastage of times.A lot of time is wasted to collect the information on the internet.Some people waste a lot of time in chatting or to play games. At home and offices, most of the people use internet without any positive purpose.Finally,immorality.This is perhaps the biggest threat related to your children’s healthy mental life. A very serious issue concerning the internet.There are thousands of sites on the internet that contain immoral materials in the form of text, pictures or movies etc. These websites damage the character of new generation.
To sum up, the internet is a most valuable source of information. The advantages of it outweigh the disadvantages .Thus,millions of people every day benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.I really believe on the power of the internet.
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1. Nowadays the access to the internet is the most important source of information. The internet has become a fully integrated part of our society, touching many aspects of our business and personal lives. So, I'm totally with using the internet.(a strong introduction).
2. First of all,communication(where is the sentence, you have to write a complete sentence).
3. Now we can communicate in a part of (a)second with a person who is sitting in the other part of the world .
4. Secondly,information (where is the sentence, you have to write a complete sentence).
5. Internet also provides different type of entertainments(different types of entertainment) to people.
6. part of the world. Similarly, you can see movies, listen (to) music etc.
7. you may be facing(may face) grave danger
8. Your personal information such as name, address, credit card number etc,can be accessed by other criminals (internet hackers)to make your problems worse.
9. through e-mail or when information is downloaded on(from) the internet.
10. or to play(playing) games.
11. materials in the form of text(s), pictures or movies etc.
12. To sum up, the internet is(one of the most) a most valuable source of information.
13. Thus,millions of people every day benefit from using the internet for work and for pleasure.I really believe on the power of the interne (I agree with you)t.
Good job Afnan. Your draft is well organized . Your ideas are very clear. And also your opinion. There are some grammatical mistakes , but you made a good work.
ردحذفthanks dr.samah i'll correct the mistakes
ردحذفWell done Afnan.your essay is very amazing.your introduction is very clear and direct to the topic.in the body,your topic sentences are very attractive. it has valuable opinions and you indicate it by reasons. I like your conclusion. But you should take care of the length of your sentences.
ردحذفHi Afnan, your draft is very good and your introduction is attractive , your ideas are clear and well organized and also your opinion is clear and supported with evidences.
ردحذفGood job Fanfan.